Cruising at sunrise

Early morning cruising and brooding paid off. Figured out my screenplay, which requires a new beginning and a tweak on the antagonist; and also a new ending for SCORPIO SETTING, making it even darker than it already is. Very excited about this short literary novel, which has no commercial possibilities whatever but which, if done right, will be as truthful and powerful (by my sensibilities, which granted are not mainstream) as anything I've written. We'll see. Obviously a challenge but I'm optimistic I can pull this off.