Thursday, December 13, 2012


Changing the point of view has improved some tone issues that were bothering me. This becomes the story stratrgy that Fitzgerald used in Gatsby ... the observer narrator reporting on the thematic character of focus. The reader learns as the narrator learns. A slower more personal development. I like it. CJ remains the focus but his new road friend tells the story.

Interesting it took me so long to realize this.

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